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Bill Yun Air Satire Channel's avatar

The dessert wispers and hums. Studed by dark cherries. Pounding the batter....Pair with coffee or Chamomile tea with orange. Or Libations.

Sounds like a great start to a long weekend...

Will share. What imagery. Verbal gymnastics.

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Lily Hawthorne ☀️'s avatar

thank you, you are too kind. I write better than I speak.

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Bill Yun Air Satire Channel's avatar

I doubt that(speaking), but yes, your writing is vivid. As a non-writer (charlatan) myself I can mentally picture what emotions the words in your work convey.

Much like, for me, I see the music (vinyl records) with headphones. The music comes through me.

I felt your words came through at just the right time to give me ideas on better food prep for the passion of enjoying the process not just consumption.

Satiating.

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